Um yeah i had to make a story for school so i did because i like making stories so im gonna put it here. Post what you think about it.Thanx!

                 Randore’s Battle 

  Randore soared through the desolate wasteland of planet Drath on his hover board thinking of his wife and two kids back home far away from the war. He started to slow down. He heard a low rumbling coming from behind him. Randore looked behind and saw three alien-like creatures each ten feet tall and running at about sixty miles an hour and gaining. “Oh no!” he shouted.

    All three aliens pulled out a shock pistol from their holsters and started to shoot at Randore. He pulled out his own silencer and started shooting back. One missile hit an alien in the stomach, killing it. The second alien jumped high into the air dodging one of Randore’s missiles. The alien shot at Randore but he was too quick and simply swerved to the left to dodge it.

   Randore shot at the third alien but blasted the ground in front of it sending the alien falling on its face in a gory mess. Randore shot at the last remaining alien and missed the first shot but hit it directly in the forehead.

    Randore stopped his hover board, jumped off and took a head phone from his backpack. He flipped a switch and started to talk, “General, I have just been attack by three enemy trackers, orders?” “At ease soldier.” replied the general,” Come back to base ASAP!” Randore paused for a moment before saying, “General what if I’m being followed?” “That’s what I’m counting on. If you are being followed we’ll make those aliens wish they didn’t.” replied the general. The transmition was cut off. Randore jumps back on his hover board and flies full speed ahead to the base.

     Several minutes later Randore gets back to the base unharmed. He jumped off his hover board and pushed a button on the back. The board folded into itself and dropped to the ground. Randore put the board into his backpack.

     Randore started to walk down a short path when there was an explosion. He dropped to the ground, covering his head with his hands. Debris fell around and on him. He looked ahead a few feet and saw a door slide open. Ten men in camouflage ran out all holding assault rifles.

     One man stopped and outstretched his hand for Randore. Randore grabbed his hand and was pulled up. The man saluted. “Thank you.” Randore said. The man nodded and ran off towards the source of the explosion.

     Randore looked behind him and saw a battle raging. An alien warship was on the ground letting alien soldiers down to face the humans. Aliens and humans shot at each other everywhere. Randore searched across the battlefield for the general. He spotted the general just as he shot at an alien running towards one of the human soldiers.

     “Fall back! Fall back!” shouted the general. The soldiers started to run back to the base, the general in the back shooting at every alien he could. The general reached Randore, “C’mon Randore fall back!” he shouted. “Wait!” Randore replied. He pulled a grenade from his belt and threw it at the aliens. The aliens scattered then realized that it wasn’t set and started shooting again. “You didn’t set it!” The general shouted. Without saying a word Randore took the generals assault rifle and aimed it at the grenade on the ground. An alien got in the way but he just shot it. He reloaded and shot. Two rounds hit the grenade and sent aliens flying through the air.

     Everyone kept running with both the general and Randore in the back still shooting aliens. They got into the base and shot the control panel for the doors. “Now what sir?” asked one of the soldiers. “We wait.” Randore replied.

    The doors shuttered and rumbled for a while then stopped. “Come out! We know you’re here!” said a deep scratchy voice. Randore put his hand up to signal everyone to wait. Nothing happened for a few moments until the door slammed open. “Open fire!” The general shouted.

     Alien and human started to shoot at each other. The general was on one side of the room, Randore on the other. Randore shot an alien with his silencer in the stomach and blooded splattered the walls. He heard a scream on the other side of the room and looked over at the general. The general got shot in the leg and then the arm just as Randore looked over.

     “No!” Randore shouted. He ran across the room as an alien stood over the general its gun aimed at the general’s head. Ready to shoot. Ready to kill. Randore rammed the alien and shot it. Right as he shot he felt a deep pain shoot through his body. He blacked out.

     Randore started to wake up and saw his beautiful wife Gabriella looking down at him. “Morning sleeping beauty.” She said. He smiled and she smiled back. “Wha-What happened?” Randore asked. “Well, when you where battling you got shot. Reinforcements came just in time to save you and the general.” “Where’s the general?” Randore asked. “Why don’t you just look to your left.” Said a strained voice that was the generals.

     Randore laughed. A young boy came in with a doctor who was holding a baby girl in her arms. “Here you go.” She said. The doctor handed the baby to Gabriella. “What’s her name?” Randore asked. “We didn’t name her yet,” said the boy, “ We were waiting for you to come back.” “Oh really Max? Then what do you think we should name her?” “Uh…. Rose.” Max replied. “Okay then we’ll name her Ro-“ There was a crash from upstairs and a high pitched scream. Then the power went out.

     Rose started to cry. “Come out! We know you’re here!” said a deep scratchy voice.

PS: It won honarable mention in the litterary fair against everyone in the school. (I’m a 6th grader in middle school.)